Basic อย่างหนึ่ง ในการเขียน paragraph ให้อ่านแล้วลื่นไหลก็คือ การใส่คำเชื่อมลงในตำแหน่งเที่หมาะสมนะครับ คิดว่าคงเคยเห็นคำเชื่อมที่เขาใช้กันบ่อยๆ แล้วนะครับ เช่น however, in addition, in contrast, moreover, therefore, instead, then นั่นเอง พวกตัวเชื่อมนี้เปรียบง่ายๆก็เหมือนกาวนั่นแหละครับ มีไว้เพื่อเชื่อมเนื้อเรื่องที่เราจะเล่าเข้าไว้ด้วยกัน พยุงโครงเรื่อง เสริมให้ตรรกะมันดีขึ้น งั้น...เดี๋ยวเรามาลองทวนกันนิดนึง เติมคำอะไรกันดีคับ...
a) Not all of the Red-shirts came to Ratchaprasong with the same motive. ___________, some Leftists were eager to see their theories put into action and simply felt their best shot had come. Poor people from most part of the North and of Isaan stood the extreme April heat as they needed Taksin home to give them the affection they never experienced with any governments. And, some current and ex-military men who believed their career paths were derailed because they were unjustly labeled as not belonged to the Godfathers clan decided to practice their M67 launching skills and guerrilla warfare tactics.
b) Buddhadas Bhikhus works helped weed out misconceptions and made the learning of Buddhism accessible to educated persons and scholars. _________, the Gen Y and Gen X people would benefit so much from studying the works of Arjarn Vor Vachirametee.
c) Liverpool is in a difficult situation. Torress injuries have a big impact on team performance. They are likely to miss the UEFA quota next season. Fans are so frustrated with the teams management. ________, the co-owners George Gillett and Tom Hicks have just put it up for sale. Benitez will be cash-strapped this summer. (ตอนเขียนนี่ ใกล้จะปิดฤดูกาล 2009-2010 แล้วครับ หงษ์กำลังแย่สุดๆ ฉุดไม่อยู่ แต่ตอนนี้ Benitez ไปแล้วครับ)
d) The Education System Reform #1 has come and gone. Anyone notices that? Now we are in full gear for Reform#2. Hopes are high. _______, I do not expect any miracle. As I recall, even with something so single-minded like the Milk for Schools Drive, we had to go through series of news reports on corruptions, logistics headaches, and mismanagement by local authorities. Seeing poor kids drinking spoiled milk and getting sick was awful. And, that went on for years.
e) Most people think cancer is the Number One cause of deaths of Thais. ______, accident is leading ahead. For the past 30 years, traffic accidents have killed over 200,000 Thai people whereas all cancers, diabetes, murder combined have killed a lot less, 100,000 people. (ตัวเลขสมมตินะครับ)
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