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Decisions can be made quickly. Or they can be made after careful thought. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The decisions that people make quickly are always wrong. Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion
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Examining about making decision, several people prefer to think carefully and make decision. They think that if they make decision quickly, the result is always wrong. However, many people like to make decision quickly. Both sides have interesting line of reasoning. Anyway, I do not agree with the idea that people who make decision quickly are always wrong.
Many experienced people can make decision very fast and most of the results are excellent. For example, one day last year when I asked my boss about the promotion campaign for the new series of the car. At first my team could not finalize the conclusion because there were some points that we did not receive information about it yet. Once my boss saw some of information, she made the decision and allowed me to execute as she told. With that decision, our promotion campaign coudl present to customers as the plan and the company could defeat with competitors due to this wonderful campaign. On the other hand, if we have to wait for more consideration, I do not think that we can release the idea to the market prior to our competitor. Thus, making decision fast should be a skill that many people have to learn and practice.
It is often that many easy matters, some people choose to extend the time to make decision. And as far as I concerned, we had better make decision for those easy issues. For instance, my sister usually take her time in the morning at least 15 minutes to think about which clothes she should wear today. And the result is that she selects the one that she chooses at first. For many times, she does not have time to make up and finally she goes to work late. Some people may have problems in choosing the food for their lunch or to name but a few. I think that if they are firmed about what they think at first, they will have a lot of time to do more things.
Although there are a lot of issues that experienced people can decide very fast, some issues need to take time for consideration to make a better result. How can we deny that in our life there are many decisions that we have to make? We should learn to identify which one is easy and which one is difficult. Find someone or study more about the difficult one, you may be the one who can make the best decision in the short time in one day
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Examining about making decision, several people prefer to think carefully and make decision. They think that if they make decision quickly, the result is always wrong. However, many people like to make decision quickly. Both sides have THE interesting lineS of reasoning. Anyway, I do not agree with the idea that people who make decision quickly are always wrong.
Many experienced people can make decision very fast and most of the results are excellent. For example, one day last year when I asked my boss about the promotionAL campaign for the new series of the car. At first my team could not finalize the conclusion because there were some points that we did not receive information about THEM yet. Once my boss saw some of information, she made the decision and allowed me to execute as she told. With that decision, our promotion campaign coudl present to customers as the plan and the company could defeat with competitors due to this wonderful campaign. On the other hand, if we have to wait for more consideration, I do not think that we can release the idea to the market prior to our competitorS. Thus, making decision fast should be a skill that many people have to learn and practice.
It is often that many easy matters, some people choose to extend the time to make decision. And as far as I concerned, we had better make decision for those easy issues. For instance, my sister usually takeS her time in the morning at least 15 minutes to think about WHAT clothes she should wear ON THAT DAY. And the result is that she ALWAYS WEARS the one that she chooses at first. For many times, she does not have time to make up and finally she goes to work late. Some people may have problems in choosing the food for their lunch or to name but a few. I think that if they are firmed about what they think at first, they will have a lot of time to do more things.
Although there are a lot of issues that experienced people can decide very fast, some issues need to take time for consideration to make a better result. How can we deny that in our life there are many decisions that we have to make? We should learn to identify which one is easy and which one is difficult. Find someone or study more about the difficult one, you may be the one who can make the best decision in the short time in one day.
Tan
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ตอบไม่ตรงคำถามครับ ย่อหน้าที่ 2 เหมือนจะตรงนะครับ แต่ว่าสุดท้ายแล้วเป็นการพูดเรื่องการตัดสินใจเร็วมีประโยชน์ยังไง ("With that decision, our promotion campaign coudl present to customers as the plan and the company could defeat with competitors due to this wonderful campaign.") ไม่ได้พูดถึงโจทย์ นั่นก็คือ "The decisions that people make quickly are always wrong."
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